I agree that skipping paragraphs is useful, I always bounce back and forth but just gotta be careful not to mix different ideas together. I feel the same way about the pandemic and distractions, it’s hard to sit […]
Hey! I also agree that introductions are hard for me, I usually only write the first sentence and try to write my intro after I feel more confident in writing my introduction. I agree that usually peer reviews […]
When I prepare for written assignments, I like to plan out what I need to do in order to have the paper done by the due date. I prepare myself to have it done a couple of days before, in order to have time to edit […]
I like how you pointed out the sources need to be analyzed more deeper. This gives me a suggestion for my own sources and to explain the sources deeper without doing too much.
I chose to review, How Individual Upbringing Affects Young Adult Romantic Relationships by Chardell Park which caught my attention with the introduction. I enjoyed reading it because the topic is interesting and […]
I find it helpful that you said the author doesnt share their own ideas because a paper like this should have two sides of a story, ones beliefs and the facts, like the textbook reading said.
I chose “Who Needs Feminism When You Have Femininity?” which was a great attention catching title to begin with and sounds very appealing to read. It was kind of hard to read due to grammatical mistakes which mak […]
I agree that this community can be dangerous for women, especially when they think they are owed intimacy and sex and have gone as far as cheering for the death of Chung and promoting acid attacks. Women aren’t […]
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I also agree that a trend was that Incels had a form of rejection and quite possibly lack of confidence, especially since they work hard on their appearance for others to like and approach them, not for […]
Incel is short for involuntary celibates, a name for those who lack romance and intimacy in their lives. The author notes a lot of interesting things about these members, such as describing them as awkward in real […]
I really like your topic, especially when you mention that the media gives them a bad reputation. I think delving in more will help people stop judging, shown by your friends being surprised when you said that […]
I really enjoyed reading your post! I relate a lot because once I tell people where I live, they automatically assume my family is well off but we’re friends with the landlord, and once our neighbors found out […]
I believe I have a couple of privileges, my parents are hardworking people. My mom works with the elderly while my dad is in charge of a department at the company he works for, bringing home a steady and reliable […]
I enjoyed reading your discussion post, especially how you included at the end your own personal thought of the reading. I agree that it’s good she sought help from her therapist as well, one can feel too safe in […]
The culture/ online community that Wu is trying to portray is the factitious disorder, when she was looking up information on faking illness.
She creates a verbal portrait of this community because she […]
The place I chose to observe people was a Korean bbq. Right off the bat, watching the servers and how they stare at customers who’ve been here long is quite amusing. They don’t shy away after being caught, con […]
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I enjoyed reading your post, especially with the mentions of how you overheard people talking about the virus and “showtime” going on. I’ve seen the wiped down marks left on train seats from the clean […]